- put persona and the website url at the top of the page
- change to hometown on the bio to match the hometown on the top of the page
- change the wording in motivations sections
- maybe add interest of hunting to the quote-get rid of I love to surf the internet
- Include frustrations-maybe he's not tech savvy
- maybe put a section
I made the changes to my actual persona. Here's what it looks like:

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