Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Week11B

In class today we spent time going over our personas. When we critiqued our personas today the suggestions I got were to:

  • put persona and the website url at the top of the page
  • change to hometown on the bio to match the hometown on the top of the page
  • change the wording in motivations sections
  • maybe add interest of hunting to the quote-get rid of I love to surf the internet
  • Include frustrations-maybe he's not tech savvy
  • maybe put a section
I made the changes to my actual persona. Here's what it looks like:


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